Whens the next chapter?

Enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more

This is a good story. Any hope of it continuing?

I doubt steatlh is the game of the chief and he s not alien to pop out of vents. He d also register the shots, we re talking close to the speed of light, me armor has both shields and dampeners.

Please continue this story. It is very good.

Excellent story. I feel that your portrayal of the characters was perfect. Linda is one of my favorite characters, but is extremely underrepresented in fanfiction. In regards to the mass effect fanboys, this is probably fairly accurate first contact. Both of these series are known for explaining the science behind their stories (though halo requires a bit of digging) and in a direct comparison a spartan II's augmentations far surpass Shepherd's abilities.

update

Very well done story. I feel you have the characterization dead on. I really hope you continue this story.

Awesome story please update

This is good keep it up

oh look the mass effect fan boys are out in force ignore them this is pretty much true chief is better then shepard

Oh look its another Master chief goes into mass effect and curb stomps everybody the fanboy up another notch I see just to make sure Shepard is truly humiliated. The halo fanboys will eat this up.

Written like a true halo fanboy, Chief op as usual, Shepperd and her team can do nothing while he shows of his omg kewl skillz.

Hope to see more Linda tis why I follow this...but do you really need Romance?
Anyway update as soon as you can

Hmm. . . I suppose a logical leap for Cortana not discovering Earth/Humans/SystemsAlliance would be merely due to the fact Shepard wouldn't -need- such things on her omnitool. . .

Either way, I like this so far, and would like to see more.