Reviews for Exoskeletal |
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![]() ![]() You've lost nothing. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story. I hope you will finish it. |
![]() ![]() Wondering why this doesn't have much exposure or reviews yet... It's really good so far! Your characterization is great, despite you saying that you're rusty. Everything seems so subtle in your writing, like there's something much deeper than what's on the surface - that's one of the best things about this story.c: I hope you give a new chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() nice chapter you got here. i like the way you showed the development of jill's plight with the days. keep it up! hope you update soon xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting. Wesker reminds me of Norman Osborn: he's crazy, but he always has a plan. Does the virus itself cause the mind-control focused through the device? Or is it separate? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the characterization is spot on. I like the way you've written this so consider me a follower. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that's one way to describe it. Jill, you're dying and you're in deep crap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! |