Ewwww, love at first sight. And also stop making the girls the targets for kidnapping. Cuz I swear if at any moment in the story if any of the girls get kidnapped Im done.

Still to early to force the romance.

What did I tell you? To show the guy being a badass. That aside, it was a great battle nonetheless.

Of course the gal gets injured, so the guys can duke it out. Some may see it as her hubris, but not me. I see it as the author wanting to push the female aside just so it can be an all males fight.

Why Umbreon? Because everyone assumes that when a girl and guy stand next to each other, their automatically a couple. Plus, for some reason, Romance is one of the most favored genres out their when it should be the 2nd to worst genre out their. (Just being beaten by Drama.)

Wow trying already to FORCE the romance in only the fourth chapter. Like seriously, let them get to know one another for awhile and then LATER on in the story build the romance up more. Why must authors always rely on Disney style romance...

Awwww come on, why does the Vaporeon have to be the asshole. DX

Secondly, seems you cant escape racism no matter where you go.

I love Shiro the Umbreon background character and his past history of being ostracized, bullied and abused for being different at young age. And all ever wanted to be, is wild and free. Being treated normal and with respect by the public, isn't of being seen as a disease or monster.

And now his key to freedom is beyond his borders and he finally achieve his goals, with nothing holding him back. I'm really impress by your deep details and relatable dialogue by the first chapter and I can't wait to read more during my summer vacation.(Thank you)

Please come back and finish this stories!

It's great!

Pokémon is plural

I wish you would have updated this regularly, noe the story isnt over, and its been 1 1/2 years later, and it hasnt been resumed.

Hello! I'm new in the reading crowd of people reading this story, but I managed to catch up in one day! It's a really goodbye story, and my favorite eeveelution/eon is an Umbreon. I rarely see any good stories anymore that have an Umbreon as one of the main characters. You've done some really good writing, so... see you (or read your stories) next time!

P.S. Aria has some major emotion swings. MAJOR ones. It's just funny how large they are though. It sometimes kills me how funny it is...

Rip this story. It shall be missed

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