I think Koran and naruto’s relationship isn’t that of lovers but parent and child, so I wouldn’t go with that pairing if I were you. This was really well written, but I wish Naruto didn’t have to get those piercings, because it makes me a bit queasy. But it makes sense considering everything.

This is great. I was a little apprehensive when you didn’t have Naruto leave ame for so long but it is turning out well. Hop you pick this up again soon. Would be a shame if abandoned

please continue

Plase update thor...

Sorry to bother you as I’m sure you are very busy and hard at work. But I absolutely had to inquire as to when the update for both of your stories would be released. (I absolutely love both of them) The best regards, and I hope you have a great number of breakthroughs and inspirations for your stories. :)

Interesting!
Cool would be something original, for example a Naruto that doesn't want to kill and fight, a bit like in Sage.
I'm looking forward to what you do with this.

Honestly thought Naruto would call the fool his real name; Obito.

Madara was not his favorite person right now.
Madara was his favorite person.
LOL!

update soon please this story is awesome

Good chapter, your way of looking at how the doujutsu work is very intresting, it was great insight to naruto training.

They begged kami for a miracle. I think Nagato should answer that call. He can still rez his paths with his real body after all. Honestly i want konan dead and Naruto taken back to ame. He should be fractured after this. like tobi and obito but for real instead of an act. Make him a playful mentally regressed side who is OP, but impossible to control. then have his rinnegan not work for the weapon persona that came about from the trauma like Danzos root shinobi.
Though i doubt that is gonna happen. He seems destined for Konoha at this point. Which sucks cause i liked where the story was headed before. Honestly the thought of him follow cannon narutos footsteps is kinda sickening. He could be so much more then rikkudo sennin 2.0

I can't wait til the next chapter comes... But apparently obito had a spare sharingan in his other eye?

I actually loved the Sherlock style of dismantling haha it was great as for pairing you could always go Shizuka (nadeshinko village chick) or Ajisai (the animal path after jiraiya kills the first one...) I like Karin... or you could do literally anything especially considering you can change any ages due to no interaction with Konoha... who says Naruto is their age if you don't want to heck you could make Naruto Kurenai or Yugao-Ankos age for all we know because... who knows or you could pick Temari or one of the female jinchuuriki and use that as a conflict point for him to fight Akatsuki like he could Target Fu or Yugito and have them be around his age and male it a test by Pain to get a jinchuuriki by himself but while he does recon he becomes attracted or entranced by them or something looking forward to whatever you do.

Your explanation of how the Three Great Doujutsu work is very interesting. It is unique to any of the stories I have read so far. Keep up that great work.

That was one of the most intense fights that I've ever read! Konan taking down Yahiko was quite a surprise, and speaking of surprises poor Bunta... That was kinda rough to read. It was really satisfying to watch Naruto punch Obito into space though. Excellent chapter! Please update soon.