I don't get what's going on.

It's not bad per se, i was expecting more since the idea is very intriguing. I'm just disappointed.

Ok i have no idea whats going on

This fic is cute. I want to see little Danny playing in a patch of flours with kitten and birds, wearing the shirt tooth gave him. No wait maybe I don't. My brain might explode from and overdose of 'AAAAAAAAW'

Jemdkdmsksmsjsmsmsjsmsjsiwmkakskskskaka *fangirl spasms* plz continue!

How old is Danny

So. Confused. How is Danny's family in that world now? Why is there a party? Who is Rune? Why is there so much going on without many explanations? Why is it so confusing.

It feels like a different story now. The first chapters were about the different dimensions and how Danny can't go between them anymore and can't see his family anymore...

You should explain HOW his family got there. There was something about portals but it was brief and didn't explain much...

Other than all the confusing parts, this story is great!

I'm a little confused how the last chapter got to this chapter...is that supposed to be explained in the next chapter?

I really like how this story is going so far and I'd love to read more. Please keep it up

Um... Im 11 and I can know words kids my age shouldn't know... not hatin the story actually loving it!

MORE!

Poor Clockwork. This had probably never happened before.

You know, this fanfic makes me despise MiM that much more. I mean, you can't steal something that's not yours and manipulate him to your will even if it cause mass destruction to your world. It would be better if you let him choose, with all his memories intact, if he wants to help you. Selfish, much?

how does bornagain connect to that?

Another awesome chapter! Keep up the great work!

Another awesome chapter! Keep up the great work!