| Reviews for Insurgent, Tobias' POV |
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  Guest chapter 7 . 7/30 Hey are you going to do the whole book ?. First 7 chapters are great. Can't wait to read the rest then allegiant as well. You have a great skill. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/6 pls get back to writing! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/6 It's been years! I need to know what happens! pls wright chapter 8! I love your work! Keep going! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/6 Finish the book! I love this story, so I really hope you find the time to finish it. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/5 can you finish this? |
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/5 i love this book soooooooooooooooooooo… much! why did you stop? I would really like to read the rest of the story! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/5 Cant wait for the next chapter! |
| FourTris46 chapter 7 . 5/6 I loooooove this! Your writing is so good! Sometimes I forget that this story isn’t written by Veronica Roth. Pleeeeeaaaaaase post more! |
| Nexcreta chapter 7 . 2/14 Hi! My name is Nexcreta and I'm from Pakistan. I have read your divergent fanfiction and continued on to your insurgent one. I read the trilogy about 7 years ago and have reread them multitudinous times since. I was looking for a fresh perspective that didn't involve tobias and tris breaking up or tris being pregnant, because let's face it, both of them kind of make you lose the true essence of the book. I have been exploring for months now but most of what I found didn't even have coherent sentences and that also kind of frustrates you more. Then, I stumbled across your fanfic which has truly been an exhilarating experience . I love everything about it. Just thought I should give my input. Although I understand your choice to keep the point alive that Tobias is, at the end of the day, an 18 year old boy. But on the other hand, seeing him so overwhelmed with lust and obsession and out of control with all the unbearable flames and heat kind of made me a bit thrown off. Let me explain. We get a slightly more mature image of tobias from the book. Mature beyond his years. All his years with Marcus making him a bit far off. For him to calculate all possible outcomes and be ready for everything. Also, the proximity scenes are very intense and powerful, they do kind of build on a side of tobias we havent encountered in the book. That being said, I am very happy with all of your work. And I do realise I am a bit late as this work is from almost a decade ago, I would really love it if you would continue your fanfic. It has brought much joy in my life, with all the mental exhaustion and frustration that has been recently pushing me around. I would truly be grateful if you find the time and the passion to rejuvenate this work of art. Regards in anticipation. |
| Bluejay chapter 7 . 3/14/2019 This is awesome, Sorry for not reviewing earlier. I read your other one too on divergent. You really represent the author's style perfectly. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/2/2018 Here in 2018, still awaiting the next chapter |
| Beatrice chapter 7 . 1/28/2018 This is amazing! I really love it. Ya know, I've started liking Divergent so much that I've been calling myself Tris instead of Bea. |
| Tris chapter 7 . 1/18/2018 Oh my gosh... this is amazing! I can't wait for more! |
| TrisDivergent chapter 7 . 1/1/2018 Please! Keep writing! I love this fanfic! It keeps me running. I had the flu over the break and I have read your fanfics divergent and this one multiple times! Please keep writing thanks so much love you |
| L chapter 7 . 11/20/2017 FINISH THISSSSS PLZZZZZ If u do dm me on wattpad using Lusername456 Thx! :) |
