I don't know if you did it on purpose, but "Shi" is Japanese for death and I am here for mass-murderer Hidan's little sister death. XD

Well,Hidan freaked me out a little bit because of the song

Wow. Shi's dad is an asshole.

This is interesting so far, and of course the dad has to be harsh but Hidan is so darn cute!

Yay! It's back!

You aren't consistent with any of the facts. You keep changing ages, and reasons behind things. First the kids are only a few weeks apart, and now they are a year apart. You said before her voice was rough because of her mothers smoking, and then you changed it to she screamed and made it rough.

At first the story was great! And than fucking Kumo kidnaped her and fanfic lost its bad-assnes. How the hell could you take form Shi her Jashinist future and make her a Konoha shinobi! BIG NO!

This story is epic
But what happens to Hidan! Pleas do a chp from his point of view! And when will they meet Omg I can't wait
Wait... Cuz itachi left the village and he joins the Akatsuki and Hidan is there to will Hidan find out thay Shi is alive?

Good luck with the edits! ;)

Nooooo! You've left it to wither away and die... DX please update eventually! Please write a small Omake or something from Hidans POV, that would be great!

Her killers were Hidan and Kakuzu weren't they? ... Well I did want to hear more of Hidan but dammit! Now she's sworn to kill them both DX

I just realised something... Please don't tell me that they won't see each other again till Shippuden? Please no... Also why doesn't she do something with Jashinism to contact Hidan?

Totally want to read Hidans POV

... You said 'Raikage' so my estimation is Kumogakure... Anyway great chapter, I was waiting for something to happen and now it has :D hope to read more of Shi and Hidan interactions, I really like them :)

i like this story but she's reborn for god's sake! but she's act like real child not 'the reborn child' she's supposed to be more mature.