Sweet! You've really captured Thomas' voice: I could hear him say it :) Sort of down to earth, not taking any nonsense. Poor Jimmy trying so much to grab his attention.

Great fan fiction, really funny...thanks !

You shouldn't have worried, this was hilarious! I was giggling the whole time XD I liked how Jimmy's hints and attempts at seduction got more and more dramatic. And Thomas' seeming disinterest was also highly amusing. Thanks for posting :)

well this fanfics make me thinl- is jimmy bad at pick up lines or thomas don't get them? anyway sweet fanfic really ;3

This was funny and cute. Jimmy following Thomas like a puppy. I loved it. :)

Ah this was so cute and funny, cheered me up!
:)

This is brilliant and lovely and hilarious. I was seriously cracking up when Jimmy lost his combs. Well done!

SQUEE. OKAY. THAT WAS PERFECT. *showers with love*

I don't know what you were worried about because THIS IS HILARIOUS. I don't know why I have such a weakness for Jimmy being absolutely ridiculous (not to mention my weakness for Jimmy's weakness for Thomas, of course.) Adorable.

I adore this, don't take it down! I've read it teice and I just wish there were other fun Thommy one shots like this!

Oh, don't delete it! It's a charming, humorous, sweet story! Ironic, just like life! I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Oh, it's not unfunny at all! You shouldn't feel the need to delete it! ;-)

I thought it was very cute and amusing - poor bumbling Jimmy and all the different things he tried to impress Thomas. Especially loved all his combs...FF people seem quite obsessed with his hair! Hee-hee!

I do wonder if Thomas was partly making it difficult for him as a bit of payback though ;-)

super cute and I found it funny!

I love a bit of Jimmy v Green rivalry/jealousy

I liked this and I am glad you posted it. i do think it is light and funny and had a happy ending - win

oh, Jimmy is so sweet :)
Very nice story :D