I have to say that I'm sad this story died, but the bit here showed promise.

Hi, I just want to say that it looks like you're pretty busy, especially with all the work you have to do. Now this is just a suggestion, but I think you should continue writing the next chapter during weekends and/or summer vacations. And in the meantime, keep up the good work. _

I absolutely love your rendishin of slightly damned pleas continue

Sounds interesting... My greatest fear is that Sabrina just turns out to be based on the author.