Reviews for The Call |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I almost cried when I thought Jade was dead! Don't do that to meeeeee! But seriously, great work on this, great plot- I really enjoyed it! Congratulations on this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooooo! Cat! *internally sobs- again* On the upside... I reslised who the guy was before Beck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... *internally sobs*... I love this story! Fantastic job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oohhh... I was tricked...trust Sikowitz to get arrested though. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bade alert! Bade alert! Bade! Squuueeeeeee! This was my brain as soon as I read the word "coconuts": SIKOWITZ SIKOWITZ SIKOWITZ! Then, my Bain as I read the words "bottles of lotion": wait, what?...! LANE LANE LANE! Hmmm, very, very interesting... I LOVE this story! Great job, and I apologise for all the many words capitals! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang. When I read "The tone of the woman's... there was something vaguely familiar about it." I was like: Cat! Alive! But dang. Jade. I see Bade in the near future... YES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not Cat! She's too sweet! Very interesting prologue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww what a cute ending! Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. |
![]() ![]() That was adorable and so sad! Ur so amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent ending! This was perfect and you are such a good writer. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. I AM SO SORRY I DIDN'T READ THIS SOONER! First, I'm a little upset this ended so soon. But I know you probably have a lot right now on your plate so I can understand. When they got to the house I was relieved and waiting for Jade to show up and then when Beck saw that cabinet with objects all owned from the girls I was taken back by that, but I could picture it all in my head and just - it was upsetting to think of the girls he killed and all their stuff all set up like prizes he won. Then when it got to the part where they found Jade, I was almost frozen when the officer apologized to Beck. I was like 'HOLLY NO!' but I apologize to my screen for yelling at it when Beck heard her mumble and she opened her eyes! So good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! I did NOT expect that! Amazing work. You've outdone yourself. ily |
![]() ![]() ![]() Groovy Chapter & More Please |