Reviews for My Pleasure
Nemoskull chapter 19 . 5/29
well that was supreme drama for dramas sake bullshit.
reality deviant chapter 35 . 7/5/2019
what lovely first flight experiance, and the latter scene was truly Great!
reality deviant chapter 34 . 7/4/2019
And as this chapter shows, being a succubus is suffering... especially in RV.
I do find the portrayal of Kurumu in this fic to be the best i've read.

was the 'doll' refference to outer moka as artificial personality created by the rosario? I always felt that artificial or not, she is a real being, seperated from 'inner', and thought the issue like two souls in one body. In the arc where the rosario was damaged, I always felt that outer should have been saved somehow-even if she is artificial she was alive, kinda like pinochio...

IT felt like her being absorbed by inner moka was a death of one of her personalities, and at the time i was reading it, made me cry...
Will this follow canon to, or will outer be saved, even if just placed into some artifact item for storage for now?
reality deviant chapter 33 . 7/1/2019
The thing about addictives in bodily fluid is not what i susually see in succubus alure.
It does have unpleasent implications regarding Nagare, though...
Making Succubi victims of their nature. And the issue about low fertility rate... Sayasaki delivered some unpleasent facts...

On that note, in my fic, i made these issues be of entirely magical nature, making the succubi creatures of lust and love and magic.

Hineri is that spider girl from the student police? for some reason it always feels like it should be himeri to me...
reality deviant chapter 32 . 6/29/2019
I really was hoping this fic would avoid making Tsukune a vampire/ghoul...
And only partly because it leads to having him paired with Moka. I was hoping this would be a TsukuneXKurumu fic. and loved their dating and interaction here. or am I wrong in this case?

Also partly because I prefer human tsukune then vampire or ghoul tsukune.

Now will this ritual of ascension be a way to get around kurumu's succubus influence on humans so they can finally do couple things, or will the vampire connection to Moka will draw him to her instead? Or will it go a multiple girls route?
FlameSparks7 chapter 28 . 6/25/2019
This has a disterbing few chapters. You really put the slime into the slug.
reality deviant chapter 29 . 6/24/2019
nice chapter, but it feels like a filler and a mood whiplash from the previous one
reality deviant chapter 28 . 6/23/2019
the start of this chapter hit me in the feels... Poor Kurumu, a succubus in RV really needs love. She really get the short end of the stick with Moka's crush on Tsukune.
FlameSparks7 chapter 26 . 6/14/2019
Poor Kurumu. Being a Succubus is hard.

Love, Kurumu taking the club seriously. And she is the glue to keep everyone together.
reality deviant chapter 26 . 6/14/2019
this last scene...
with tsukune kissing moka, and Kurumu's feelings for him, as well as her actions the teasing and attempts to be accepting and good girlfriend and to not bring disaster on him due to charm... its really touching. its a strong scene. well done. particularly that last line. Will Tsukune ever say it back?

Wonder whats the True Form of Koike... it was good way to show that the group under Kuyo is not entirely corrupted evil thugs.
FlameSparks7 chapter 25 . 6/13/2019
Best Kurumu, Mum of the team. And considering how soft she looks, best pillow of the team as well lol
V01dSw0rd chapter 4 . 6/12/2019
Uhh...
Have you not read the second manga set- there’s more details about her mother, which are VERY relevant!
V01dSw0rd chapter 3 . 6/12/2019
Wasn’t Kurumu going to kiss him when Moka pushes her out the window?
V01dSw0rd chapter 1 . 6/12/2019
You know... in the Anime Kurumu IS In the same class as Moka...
It’s Yukari who gets put into their class second year! (The reason for the comment in the manga)

A thought- take out the “Even” at the start of the sentence about her true form , so it flows more smoothly!

Wasn’t the class rep voted on during the chapter Mizore was introduced? Or was that class president?

I get it- the boy is the surgeon’s grandson!
reality deviant chapter 25 . 6/12/2019
a nice way to resolve it. quite different then the usual -which is welcome.
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