10/10 so far

This is an excellent start. Here’s hoping the author comes back to it someday.

Love the premise. Wish there was more. Thanks for the read :)

Nice

This is so good!

Why no more?PLEASE continue this

I love the pace

A pity that it ended here. It was a very entertaining story thus far.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

Boring. Boring. Boring

I urge you to come back and rediscover your muse. It's a really promising story!

What the ever loving fuck just happened?

The title is so bloody clever, and for that reason alone, I've favorited this and you. I'm sure this will be a good read.

Very interesting plot, just hope that you continue this story.

Hi, I'm quite pleased with your imagination and the variety of lovable characters you've come up with. The simple conundrums that you've put Harry in are hilarious, like the clothing bit just now. Some descriptive adjectives would have made the description of the ensemble that he ended up wearing a lot funnier. I am also enjoying the slow lead up to the Harry and Bellatrix pairing. The amount of detail that you have put into portraying a different time and a different Wizarding sport, dueling, has been appreciated. One of your reviewers believed that Bellatrix was the one to call the lightning; I however, noticed that you had Bella frequently glancing to a shadowed box that most likely contains a forbidding figure from the House of Black, likely her father or her uncle. Runic seating was genius of you. Plus, you have taken a past concept (I wouldn't exactly call it common, but I've seen it in a few stories; you do it better) about Harry's scar being a rune and actually managing to make it obviously mysterious. I love your character Flume. I wonder what the consequences of running into the blonde at Hogwarts are; is she Narcissa? Instead of Bella and Harry falling for one another, it'd be hilarious for Harry to somehow end up with a wand to his back wedding because of some ridiculous reason of propriety. Aside from being the owner of a famous pub, Harry doesn’t seem to have much going for him the Black family would approve of, especially when his origins are in question. Flume and Rosemerta, who know Harry, would find such a shotgun wedding hilarious. I wonder which relative of the Weasley clan will turn up next, I recall something about an aunt or great aunt in the books. Anyhow, Tom the Journal may eventually end up livid and unpredictable because the basilisk is now slain. Myrtle may not exactly have a tendency to remain quiet about her late night visitors. Also, you've yet managed to remain mysterious about the old man with the dagger, yet I suspect that he’s a more jaded Flume. I do hope that you continue this someday; I know that fanfiction isn't my purpose on this earth and it likely isn't yours either.

-Brittany

I don't know why you stopped writing, because for me it was one of the best HP fanfic.

Well, its a shame this has been left unfinished.