This might just be the meanest ending ever written :P

very interesting. that's horrible I would hate to be compelled to do whatever the compeller pleases

interesting ;) all being a dream makes it quite realistic, nice touch.

Wow. Just wow. Amazing story, loved it! :]

That was extremely hot. A strong, enticing tension was held throughout the piece. Even without it being 'real' it was awesome. In fact, it might even be more hot to consider it as a fantasy that Klaus (subconsciously) came up with. Excellent job -

this was amazing and the end and im crying. amazing job. i love the way you wrote them. and the anticipation of something happening between them built up and built up and then nothing happened and i think i prefer it that way, because it was very in character, all of it.

like i said, wonderful job, you're a seriously amazing writer. keep writing! xx