YOU GO HAYATO! BE THE MAN AND KICK BELS GOOD FOR NOTHING AND PERVERTED ASS! Thank you for this! The song wanted by Hunter Hayes was perfect! I like your style! I'm a hardcore GokuChrome fan and i always will be! This is like The MurasakixHajime ship a bit... Ciao ciao!

It's so hard to find a good 5996 and you did a great one!

this storry is so sweet and cute
Please make another if you can
it was great! I need more 5996

Awww this is sweet! I have cavities now thank you very much. Simply adorable! Awsome job!

A great 5996 story.

This was really cute :3

amazing, I'm usually not much for this pairing but really good job

Cute. Love it, just one little thing (it's not even really a mistake, just ... my opinion) Tsundere doesn't EXACTLY mean someone who is tough on the outside and fluffy/soft on the inside, it ... describes someone who STARTS off as tough, rough, etc. but then softens up or shows more of their soft side as time goes by or as the story progresses. Either way, it defines Gokudera well, and basically the whole world mis-uses Tsundere anyway, it's a small pet-peeve of mine that I thought I'd share.

So, you can take it, leave it, your choice. Just wanted to say that this was cute and amazing,

W.R.T.

UwU this is so cute omg... i might even start shipping these two now... * thumbs up* i loved this :)