This is definitely a promising start. I can't wait to read the rest!

why did you quit writing? you are very good. you have a knack for drawing the reader in and helping them to connect with the characters. very well done!

great job

love this

I don't think I will ever get tired of reading this story! Great work!

xD THIS made my heart so happy to see Elrohir become a Captain. x3 I dunno why, but it really made my heart swell with joy. And it matches so well with your other story too~

Absolutely brilliant.

Gosh. What a great story. I loved it until the very end. This final celebration was everything Elrohir deserved to have. I am glad with this end of the story. Thanks for sharing it.

And the best grandparents of Arda as well... Elrohir is a lucky elf...

Elrohir has the best parents of all Arda... That's official!

What a victory! And yes yes... I also should be worried about what is coming now.. Poor Elrohir.

I was sure Glorfindel would come. He loves Elrohir. This Enel is a bad guy...

Elrohir is a great warrior, isn't he? But it must be hard to be his mentor...

This was a great beggining. I love stories about the twins.

Gah I kept it together until Elladan's toast! What an absolutely stunning end to a really emotional story. It was so healing to the soul to see the brother's laughing in the beginning. Glorfindel ever being the solid rock in Elrohir's turbulent emotions and Elladan his never fraying tether. Just beautiful. I cant even properly express how much I enjoyed this chapter and this story in general. I am so used to Elrohir the healer and Elladan the warrior I wasnt sure I could really see the switch. You pulled this off masterfully and to be honest the peace this last chapter has brought to my heart and overall feel of the story will be with me for many years. I am glad I waited until I was mentally and emotional clear to read this. You have made my experience quite unforgettable and I thank you, my master stoyteller, for a truly wonderful tale _