HEY CAN YOU UPDATE THIS PLEASE THERE IS NO OTHER STORY LIKE THIS

I don't remembered exactly when I followed this story but it still holds a special place in my heart as one of the first stories I started following ever since I joined this site. When I was checking your account I was happy that you came back here. I then wished you updated this. I know this is one of your earlier works but it also has one of the best moments a dramatic story can have. Not to mention the character you have built for Naruto.
Anyway, it's great to know you're back, so I sincerely hope you'll find the spark to continue this one. Have a great day!

Awesome sad that this is abandoned

Can't wait for more chapter's

ok..the guest reviews are crazy. anyway greetings nature-sama I am master chaos. I don't usually review stories cause I read so many on my nook, but recently I've learned that some authors wait anxiously for them, so I will start with my first review in 10 years. your story is amazing. I saw one of the reviews saying it wasn't an eroge but there is an eroge out there, you have taken this idea and totally blown me away with the results, it has been a long time since I read your story so I reread everything and the beginning was just as amazing as I remember it. I am kinda sad and worried about how the last chapter ended, only because of Naruto's thoughts, makes me dread the outcome, especially the sad scene with the end of shokos birthday, and now beni. it has been a decade seen I've seen the anime and the complete mind bend of a ending it was. I look forward to the next update and thank you very much for taking time out of your busy life to write and entertain us *bows* I don't like suggesting anything with the stories future, it is yours and I am around for the ride. this is Master chaos signing out.

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You should update. Love the chapter though.

Really loving this story, especially with the lack of fics on Shuffle. It's definitely one of my favorite stories and I can't wait for more chapters.

I am starting to fall for this story
So plz continue
Ignored flamers that might criticize about your story
They got nothing on you
so plz update soon

I wonder what happened next

Nice chapter. Looking forward to the next.

Great chapter

i cant recall, is shoko a cannon character in shuffle? otherwise heart whelming chapter.

just found this story I have to say it is one of my favorite stories, keep up the fantastic job your doing. Can't wait for next chapter.