Reviews for Coming Home
SecretArtLotus chapter 12 . 2/14/2016
Come on! No, don't end! This story isn't even halfway through the end. I want to see Wally in his strongest fighting against Eobard. He atleast deserve to be in his strongest after being in the Speed Force. And please for goodness sakes, Artemis shouldn't die! She should live! She shouldn't have die! She just got back with Wally for goodness sake! She has a baby Irey in her still. So you can't end like this please? What about future Wally? He should give his full help for his daughter right? Come on! You need to update! Please! For the sake of a happy Wally and Artemis with their daughter, Irey. You should!
AmyRose512 chapter 12 . 5/24/2015
Hi! I've really been enjoying this story so far. Irey seems like the perfect mix of Wally, Artemis, and her own unique self. I hope that you save Artemis. I can't wait to read what happens next! :)
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 12 . 11/3/2014
Oh wow! This is insane, great job!
00-OnceInABlueMoon-00 chapter 12 . 10/1/2014
SAVE HEEEERRRRR! D:
Guest chapter 12 . 8/20/2014
Please update this story soon! I also want you to bring back Artemis, because like in the chapter, without artemis there's no Irey!
Guest chapter 12 . 8/19/2014
No! Artemis can't die! Please save her!
Anonymous chapter 12 . 8/19/2014
Are you joking!? Bring her back for heaven's sake! Oh my Lord, I'm crying!
Player Zero chapter 12 . 8/19/2014
Oh no! Save artemis! Please continue soon! I want to see Wally kick some butt after that
RUHLSAR000 AKA Bob Fluffkiller chapter 12 . 8/19/2014
Do you really want to be writing a paradox. Artemis dies, Irey isn't born, no one saves the flash, meaning the original time line resets cause Irey to be born come back and Artemis dies the cycle starts again. Beside I like Artemis, my vote she doesn't die. Love the story.
spitfireforever chapter 12 . 8/19/2014
Why!? it was so sad! :( i want artemis alive please , i need my spitfire
AstoriaRedfern chapter 12 . 8/19/2014
I want Artemis alive. I need Spitfire.
Artemis173 chapter 12 . 8/19/2014
ARTEMIS MUST LIVE! YOU CAN'T JUST GIVE IREY BACK HER FATHER AND THEN TAKE HER MOM AWAY! Also how the heck would they save Irey is Artemis wasn't alive to have her? But anyways, ARTEMIS IS MY FAVORITE! Please don't let her stay dead!
The Almighty Leprechaun chapter 11 . 8/12/2014
Oh no! Poor Jay!
The Almighty Leprechaun chapter 10 . 8/12/2014
Are they going to use the cosmic treadmill? What is Thawne going to do to Irey?
The Almighty Leprechaun chapter 9 . 8/12/2014
Are they going to tell the Wests about the baby? I cant wait to see their reactions.
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