I made it through the first few chapters, but this was the one that made me cry

I love Chalant, I'm just going to say that now, I live Chalant.

I read this entire story in one go, in one day, and I just ... wow, that honestly blew me away. You put so much care in perfectly detailing what Artemis, Nightwing and Barry were feeling, and you did it so amazingly beautiful! I have no words to describe how much this moved me. The funeral made me cry and I was on the edge of my seat when Barry was trying to get Wally out of the speedforce. You wrote all of these characters spot on, you seriously nailed it with all of them and that is such an amazing priviledge to see! I just want to thank you for putting this gorgeous piece of fanfiction out there. You are definitely gifted!

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I tried so hard to not speed read through this but I guess I still did. It's been years since Wally's "death" and I'm still not over it. Here's to hoping Netflix will actually create a Season 3 and that a portion of it will be dedicated to bringing Wally back. But until then I'll just keep rereading this over and over again because the emotions were all so real and ugh my heartstrings!

O MY GOD. I love this story. I love the angst and the frustration and tears and pain and happinesses, it is just amazing I am seriously crying right now. This is beautiful. I love this, this is the most feely fanfic I have ever read and I love you for that! Thank you for writing this so much!

WARNING: Me actually reviewing a story for once begins here...

This story felt so... real. In more ways then one. It really brought the characters to life, all the pain that was there I could understand all of it, almost as if you, the author, knew this pain. (Which I hope that you never experienced ANYTHING like this.) It also felt like THIS story feels just soooo right. As if there is no other way it could have played out. THIS should have been at the end of season 2, or, if not, then right in the begging of season three.
After reading all of this now, I feel so unsatisfied with season 2's ending. "Business as usual"? [- Nightwing] Bullshit. This stuff, this angst is the real deal, or at least it should be. I loved Nightwing/Dick's character, I loved Artemis and Barry and Bart and Wally, they all were perfect.

This story was written so beautifully and I can tell you this, that you and this story earned 1 more favourite and a follow, but I seriously think that that isn't enough. I am actually, seriously not kidding when I say, this should be published by DC. As a comic, as episodes, as whatever, I don't care. That is how great this is. And I completely suggest this story to anyone and everyone.

Wow this is the longest review I have ever written, still... this barely covers all the amazing things that I have felt reading this story. Anyway, Kitty out! :3

This is sooo freaking deep, it's beautiful, it just makes this all feel so real in every way.

Wow. Now this is really feely. I haven't felt this feely from a fanfic for so long and then this almost made me cry! My eyes were actually stinging. It's really amazing. :,)

That was an absolute perfect ending. I loved this so much, and I'll definitely be reading it again

What is going on? Where is Wally? I have no idea where you are going with this!

This story is sad, but I love it so much. I don't usually read sad stories, but the fact that you wrote a sad story, it's your first one and I have been crying with the chracters is impressive. That one memory with Aqualad (both the goldfish and Kaldur) made me laugh a bit

That was a really sweet chapter. I love this story so much.

Gah it's so sad. I love it, it's different from what I usually read, but so, so sad

You nailed it. So sad. I'm actually crying right now

This is a really good story. And incredibly sad. But that's kind of the point right now so I'm not complaining

The best ending ever.

I don't have words, I want to make my reviews long but I just can't express how great of a story this is honestly. But I'll never forget it because it was that good.

I hope you write more for spitfire. :)