man that story was the best I've read so far

I'm confused how can Harry be a week older, was he born to a different mother?

That was probably the best horseman ascension I've ever read. Awesome chapter. Can't wait to read more of this. Thankfully, I won't have to, since I'm late to the party.

But Harry chose it not them. Harry seems blinded by his own interest.

So Sirius is the Lord of nightmares. Doesn’t Snape get anything? Isn’t that why Harry said he had to be there for the adoption? Any way aren’t the adults joining the adventure?

One question that keep bugging me. Why didn’t Black just adopt him?! You can still have the same thing about adoption but then it actually feel like he’s family. Would Harry want to bring down Snape and Black for not saving him from the orphanage? He would still go through the anger towards his old family when Black tells him Potter disowned him. Still get the story as you have it now but links those two to Harry in a more realistic way that makes sense. I’m actually reading this for the second time. The first time I stopped because I just doesn’t make sense for Harry not to resent Black and Snape for making him stay at the orphanage. Black told Harry before he left that he could live with him, BUT why didn’t he do that earlier!

So I’m a little confused on who Luna and Hermione got. Who do they control?

Geez!

Thanks for the chapter

Great first chapter

Stood on end, I have been. I remember the first fiction I have read of this sort - Piers Anthony wrote "On A Pale Horse", the first of his "Incarnations of Immortality" cycle - I recommend the entire cycle. (Amazon has the cycle entire in Kindle format - for those of you preferring paper, Dell Rey has the cycle in both paperback AND hardcover - you can order it from Amazon also.)

Quirrel the snack - definitely a new one.

Surprise the Third - Luna is a year early. Who will pick that up first - Dumbles or Minerva?

nice story well done

Wow, just wow. Thank you for writing this brilliant story, all the best, Janet x