Can you write where pinkie pie was created in the same lab like shadow was and she and shadow are siblings and maria was like a older sister to them and pinkie memorys are triggerd when maria is metiond.

Great story so far! Hope you can update soon!

Are you going to do all seasons of Sonic X? Also, can you make Sonic and Rainbow Dash as a couple? They look so cute and good together!

nice chapter I understand how hard it was try to get the net one out next month all right.

Defintly worth the wait and great piece of originality. I also liked how you worked in the moment when Sonic met Helen and made his promise. It was all good, hardly a thing wrong, maybe a few typos here or there, some of zecora's rhymes could be better but, I understand the difficulty of that so credit where credit is due. I am glad to see a new one after all this time and hope to see one soon, if not now then sometime in 2020. _ Take care.

can you please try to get this story updated in a week or two all right?.

can you try to get another chapter out at the end of the month please?.

More chapters! This story is awesome!

Well worth the wait and a nice job. I look forward to the next one. A belated Merry Christmas to you and a Happy new year. :)

this chapter was amazing! i cant wait for more

Now I'm very confused by Steam. What are his next movement? Anyway I'm glad that this story continues.

took you long enough but it was worth it though

Because Sonic X has episodes base on games like the Chaos Saga and Project: Shadow, are you going to add episodes base on what happens in My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic? Like the Crystal Empire, Discord’s reformation, and Magical Mystory Cure? Not trying to Spoil it, just wondering.

This story is great! Please keep going!

plz i need you to continue the story coz it is damn good story that i ever read.