Awesome. Love reading this.

Brilliant. Love this. They are so perfect.

I'd love to see more

I don't think that this story truly shows the main character's personalities very accurately. What's with all of the cringy endearment like they have completely changed and decided now to be an old married couple, I think the Doctor and Rose would laugh at this kind of behaviour for themselves. Even the get together, should be new and awkward and intense, seems too familiar, like they could have been playing an old favourite game of theirs.

You know, in the States, it's a tradition for the friends and family of the bride and groom to decorate their honeymoon vehicle with shaving cream on the windows, tin cans attached to the tires, and a giant sign attached to the back of the vehicle proclaiming "Just Married" as a warning to all passersby to steer clear of the occupants of said vehicle; unless they want to see said occupants being disgustingly cute. I only brought that up, because I can totally see Jack trying to attempt to perform the former two actions on the TARDIS(and failing spectacularly), and succeedingly performing the third(with the TARDIS's help, of course). Just an idea, I don't know if it's a good one or not, but you're welcome to use it all the same.

awesome. more please soon.

Great story :)

Love it! Funny and sexy :) keep em coming!

brilliant again. please update the next chapter soon.

OMG I love this so much. More please soon!

Brilliant chapter, can't wait to read some more :)

Hilarious!

I'm so excited to read more!

More of Stay, if you would please.

good story I can't wait to read more