Reviews for Under the Stairs
The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 4/5/2019


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GoodshipHarmony chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
So cute!
Thank you for sharing.
hisnhers chapter 1 . 12/3/2016
Nice twist.

-his
Starfox5 chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
Nice bait and switch, with a sweet ending.
whatdoidowiththisaccount chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
This got so happy at the end. I loved it! Misdirection successful!
Litfreak89 chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Loved this... I love any story that has James and Lily alive.
HarmonyLover chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
This is really adorable - and had me fooled utterly at the beginning! I was convinced it was little Harry at the Dursleys we were reading about, and then all of a sudden it became AU Harry with a little sister, and his parents still alive and well...so lovely. :)
Bad Mum chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Very clever! I was pretty sure it was a misdirection, but I couldn't work out how till I got to the end. Kudos.
exodore chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
cool. I could see this becoming a full story. I read 'a different Halloween' recently, and while that story drove me up the wall for a presently unknown reason, the concept I still find interesting. regardless, this was well written and entertained me for the minute it took to read. :)
dancer4813 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Love it! :D And you're doing really well with your "misdirection" skills! I didn't exactly realize what was happening for a moment while I was reading... But then I realize you were just leading us readers on... ;) Great job though! You set it up really well!

-Megan
Hurin3 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Very nice, and great twist too. You got me.

Thanks for writing!

Don
Mistress Leigh chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
I was so happy to see how this ended, since I was afraid you had been recently corrupted and were going to traumatize me. :o) It was a definite surprise, even though I figured you were misdirecting us somehow. Loved it!
MariusDarkwolf chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
That was actually quite nice
lorien829 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
I really enjoyed this little piece. Like another reviewer said, I knew I was being misdirected, but I wasn't sure how it was going to end up. At first, I was wondering if it wasn't Harry's son playing under the stairs.

It is fun to imagine how Harry's life would have been if there'd been no Voldemort. There is a lot of scope for imagination there.
Covante chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
A nice little fic, something different. Got a bit suspicious when the sleeping bag was mentioned instead of his cot mattress but still thought it was Dudley when the door was opened. Probably good that I didn't get more than a single sentence to think about why the person opening the door called him Harry instead of Potter or freak. There is the question of why his mum and dad would chuck broken toys under the stairs instead of shooting a reparo at them but that's not something you'd realize until after you'd finished so I don't think it affects the story any.
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