Hi, I read _Race Against Time_ up to halfway through Chapter 18 and I like this alternate POV. Really good! :D

Ah, a nice chapter from Kili's point of view! You certainly showed the pain he was going through, and it was a nice chance to see his perspective on things, and why he fought to stay alive instead of give up.
A job well done!

Yo!

This one-shot is really in the line of Race against time. You did great. Everytime, I am surprised how good you describe Thorin and his links with his nephews.

See ya!

I Absolutely Love you!
Your Fic has made me smile, made me frown, made me cry and made me envious. Your fics have defendantly made me feel. I stay up past my bed time reading them cutting about two hours of sleep out. All I can think of while at work is my lunch break so I can read some more on my phone lol. I envy as a want to be writer how you are able to do all this. Your skill amazes me.

How did you learn to write like this? I truly want to learn for writing reasons as well as role play reasons. This is truly amazing. I am on chapter 19 now. I found Fan art on Deviantart that lead me to your Fic.

Soooo intense ! 3

I love it, it's amazing! Thank you for posting this:)

Aww, I love seeing Kili's reaction here! Kili is my fav, and getting inside his head after Fili has his outburst is just awesome! But poor Kili! Its so sad and in so much pain! Its so sweet though, I just love how he keeps calling for Fili over and over again. It really calls out to the heart. Love this story too!

I just want to say that I think this one-shot, and the larger story it belongs to, is brilliant. The grief and angish that you are putting the Durin family through feels so real and yet so good. Stories with physically/emotionally hurt Kíli and emotionally hurt/protective Fíli and Thorin are my favorite and it makes so happy when I find a good one that I haven't read yet and is complete. Quick question though, I saw on your profile page that you'll accept prompts, could I send one to you and you send me one back, as that'd only be fair?

Oh my goodness I'm cry my poor baby

OMG I loved this! I"m so glad you decided to do this. It's totally and completely awesome to read this from Kili's point of view. He's been so sick for so long and we've only been on the one side of it all. This was a real treat thank you!

Very well written(I don't know how I missed this story until now, I've been reading the main story it's based on) from Kili's point of view. I hope he isn't too hard on himself(well OK so maybe I do, because after all we love it when they suffer don't we?;) He's not being selfish - he's just understandably so exhausted. Breathing is a strange thing. :) It's very easy when there is nothing to interrupt it's ease, an automatic response you don't even have to think about, but any disruption and it's exceedingly hard work when you have to fight for each breath and fight through pain on top of that, when every breath has to be a conscious effort and it literally would be easier to just stop. He needs to keep fighting but this is well beyond a marathon at this point for him. I hope someone lets him know that.

I like it, it was really good and refreshing see things from Kili's point of view especially after such a hard incident as getting a dressing down by Fili for giving up on living.

Aw, poor Kili, he's struggling so much just to breathe and the darkness keeps creeping in...But I'm so glad that Kili's decided to fight and that he wants to live.
And I love how Dis is all worried about Fili and sends out a search party while Thorin is just all 'he's fine.'
I loved this, it was good to read from Kili's pov!

Haaa, so good :D I really loved this chapter 3 Helps to clarify a bit and I now understand how Kíli is feeling through all this. Poor guy...*pats his head* Lovely written, as always!

Kili feel same way as Fili do ... how sweet but in this point in this fanfic it made me more sad , I almost feel that darknes as Kili do and sometimes I catch myself stop to breathing like Kili when I was reading this :O :D :D oh god I hope they won't die because I do it too ...