Um... YES!

This was wildly intriguing! Why wasn't this scene in the show, the show needs more intense Killian and Emma scenes, this was a WONDER, charged with life fire emotions and electricity...I especially adore how Emma called out for "Killian" in a room of people only just getting to even know the man behind the infamous moniker "Hook". Bravo, nicely done this was a short moment well enjoyed!

Loved the story! Could you make a second part? (you can call me a dreamer xD)

Amazing.
But what the hell just happened!

Hmm ... interesting idea.

Liking this :)
Write more?

Good peices bad plot as a whole

Please write more, PLEASE!

Has to be the fifth time I've read this and it still gives me shivers. Love love LOVE!

Omg. Amazing! Every part of it, and add to that the fact that you made each and every character so believable, I could plainly see this happening on my screen (if. only). LOVE IT.

I'm confused like probably everyone else in that room. What just happened?

I loved it, great job! I really, REALLY think this deserves a second part. It would be GREAT to read a second part of this. Beautifully written!

I really like how you display Emma and Hook's back and forth here. The others watching feel the need to be protective, but Emma and Hook know exactly what the other is doing. She's not afraid of him and he's not afraid to talk to her bluntly and honestly. I don't know if I explained that right, but either way, nice job with this. I want this to happen on the show like you have no idea. :)

This was amazing love it 3

Amazing