will you ever come back to this story?

I LOVE THE TRIANGLE, Fruck but I love AngoxNatsu more but I really don't want Semimaru to be heartbroken as shwit(I'd feel really sorry for Semimaru but no matter what I really can't stop loving AngoxNatsu) I ship AngoxNatsu too much

Haha, I love that love triangle too, but I have a feeling that Ango was watching after Natsu like a mother hen mostly because she reminded him of Shigeru :p

Moooorree. I want more. Please. U_U

Hi :) I'm not at all familiar with this fandom, so I'm not sure about categorisation, characterisation and all other complicated c-words ( ;) ). That said, enjoyed reading this. Some of your descriptions seemed slightly excessive/purple prosy, but I'm aware that that's a style thing and my own tends to be kind of bare :p I did notice that there were punctuation errors in your dialogue, though, particularly that you don't use punctuation marks at the end of dialogue, which is standard. So instead of: ["Or, is that you're in love with her", Ango stated] it should be ["Or is that you're in love with her," Ango stated.] Not a huge deal, but it did become a little distracting, especially toward the end. Best of luck x

Well, personally, I think Ango is a bit OOC...but I don't mind. Keep it up! You have a great start!

So glad there is another 7 seeds fanfic. Update soon :D

Uwaaaa... this fic is good :)
I hope Natsu ended up with Ango though, hehe
I'm so glad with Ango and Natsu embraced why you didn't respond his kiss, Nats? Why...? ;_;
Waiting for the next update xD

KYA! I absolutely love this. This is my favourite triangle too.

I have a question though. Ango confessed to the group that he had killed Hana. Did you take that out entirely? Because I really feel that would also influence Semimaru and Natsu's behavious around him.

Other than that, I love this. It's so cool how on target you were with Semimaru and his reactions.

Great job.

Yay! Finally, the love triangle fanfic everyone's been waiting for! :-D

I really liked it how you didn't make it a typical happy end, but rather decided to show each characters' feelings of insecurity, anxiety and complete confusion.

Though I think Ango will probably not be the one to take the first step, considering he's got zero experience in the field of love (his zodiacal sign is Virgo, after all! XD ). Thus, he certainly won't act this self-confident about his feelings towards Natsu. My personal bet is that he'll react unconsciously with jealousy to some advance of Semimaru on Natsu.

Once S. realizes he loves Natsu, he'll try to get through to her heart because he knows that it's impossible for him to beat Ango in a fight, he realized that during the Minor Heat arc already.

And then Ango will act irrationally angry and be completely confused at the same time because he doesn't understand at all why he feels like that! Hilarity ensues... can't wait to see that!

And we shouldn't forget that Natsu may feel it to be a bad thing getting too close to the person who 'killed' her best friend's girlfriend. We still don't know how Arashi will react to Ango once he learns about Hana's, Ango's and Ryou's encounter.

Anyways, I SO look forward to how Tamura-sama will develop the relationship between those three! You sure picked well, Ango, Semimaru and Natsu are my most favourite love trio.

To give more people the chance of reading your fun one-shot, I linked it on the 7 Seeds Wiki, in the Fanwork section. I hope you won't mind? Here's the link: wiki/Fanwork
Maybe you'll have fun reading/watching the other 7 Seeds fanworks too!

Looking forward to your next story already!

Lg, Ysaye