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This hit me right in the feels. As a big fan of the 2003 series and Leo being my favorite, he still is, and 2k3 version is still my favorite, it hurt me to see him this changed in season 4, and I'm really sad that he had to go all the way up to Japan just to heal, and to realize something his brothers have been telling him all the time, but he was just too wound up and wouldn't accept their hints.

I would really like to read two or three more chapters to this story as a follow up and see where Leo's and Raph's brotherhood will continue and if Raph will reach Leo. I always liked their special bond. No matter what they were here for each other. They always were.

I like the symbolism of the red leather. It's something that only the two of them know. And I like the symbolism of the lights on the police car. Red and blue. Raph and Leo.

The last two sentences brought tears in my eyes. The story is bittersweet amazing and perfect.

You did a great job. I don't know the song, but I'll definitely check it out.

Really bitter sweet story. I enjoyed every moment of it. Thanks!

This is a punch right in the feels and so, so well done. Raph and Leo's relationship is one I am never going to be tired of reading (or writing) about, and I love what you did with it here; your Raph voice and their interactions were spot-on. And the last two lines...UGH, PERFECT. Fantastic job with this one.

Aww cute, shhh I'm not going into disbelief, I'm just rollin with it ;)

you did a great job. I like your stories.

Wow! Heartbreaking, sad and strangely beautiful. Love the symbolism of the red leather.

Excellent story. Great emotion, great writing.

Wow. So good. You really illustrate the underlying issues that Leo struggled with after that episode and because of your fine story, I feel like I understand what he was going through better! Nicely done.

Oh, gosh. I really envy your way with words. All your stories are awesome. Great work!

That was soo good! I hope there's more!

I haven't words to describe my reaction to this, but I can assure you that the reaction is positive. 'Kryptonite' fit perfectly, by the way. I will definately look into your other work and keep an eye out for future stuff. This was very well written, touching, and believable. I really like the dynamics of the turtles, especially the younger two turning to Raph in Leo's 'absence'. Keep up the good work!

This would make an amazing story do you plan on continuing it?

Wow. An awesome story and very true. Raph wasn't able to help Leo this time because Leo wouldn't let him like he did the last time. Nicely done on this. You were great with this, and I can see this happening.

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