It's been quite the while since you updated, hasn't it? I would like to see more of this story and I hope to see another chapter up soon.

this is a really good story. i like the descriptive language and how you made the characters. great job:)

Oh my god I LOVE THIS.

Sniper and Spy's friendship, the way you wrote him adjusting and getting introduced, the way you write everyone, it's absolutely perfect x3 please update soon!

And so it begins! A struggle with the BLU Spy makes for an interesting start. Wonder where this will go? Guess I'll just have to follow and find out _

Very interesting concept to the story with an ending that didn't exactly set things in stone, but it sure did make a good prologue to the actual game. I also liked how you used things VALVe had already put into the storyline to make your ideas more genuine and true to the game. I was a little bit concerned about how the "respawn chip" was going to work, but it worked out fine.

I really liked the story...the characters are captured really well and I like your writing. More people should read it.

Aw man, this deserves way more attention!
Everyone's perfectly in character, really well done :D