Well, you made the Guardians look positively evil in this chapter. You seem to have a rather cruel sense of humor if I may say so myself. This is however undeniably amusing to read, as much as I hate to admit it. I can say I'm not particularly fond of the idea of Pitch Black being tortured in his own home by such means. But regardless of my own personal feeling about the physiological trauma you cause Pitch in this story, I must give credit where it is due. This is still a very good work of fiction, and you have excellent talent for writing. I will overlook the factor of your sick and twisted imagination, as I would be lying if I said I didn't have one just as bad if not worse myself. Please, do continue the good work.
-Joe.

Hi, I am a registered Fanfic writer who is to lazy to log in but i wanna say, Damn, you write a good story XD. And yes, I see this story has not been updated for like two years but im kinda new to this scene, only been around for a few months. I am homeschooled with no regard for punishment so I practically read fanfic all day and you are by far one of the best writers i have ever seen on this site. I hope you continue to write for a long time because you are one badass writer!

Gods, way to break the forth wall! Very Unique! His thoughts on why they/we create fanfiction is especially enlightening.

I've come to the conclusion that Abby is the female Aiden Pearce.

Love the chapter name!

Hello, Abby. It took me three weeks, but I have finally finished this wonderful story of yours, and I just wanted to tell you...

Holy.

Flocking.

Hell.

Thatwasamazingandseriously,wheredoyougetthatkindofimaginationfromDOYOUKNOWHOWMANYPEOPLEWOULDKILLFORSKILLSLIKETHESE!? I am SO impressed with this, I seriously was wondering if you submitted this to DreamWorks or something along those lines and OH MY GOSH! How did you DO that!? Typically, I am a responsible being that values sleep and their grades and maintaining social contact. But while I was reading your story I was all like "FLOCK IT I'M READING BEOCH LEAVE ME ALONE!" *sigh*
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NOW ONTO THE SEQUEL, I MUST VANISH FROM THE REAL WORLD BETWEEN THE LINES OF YOUR ART! Although, next time, maybe you should do a few quick spell checks here and there.

Sincerely (and with a shite ton of jealousy, admiration, and respect), Spritefire
P.S. would you bless my story with a review or two? Please? Having your approval would be... *carlton dance*

ABBY! You evil little genius, you! That ending! That ending was pure perfection! You never fail to amaze me.

I love this story. It's beautiful and dynamic and incredibly well-written and full of character development and feelings. It's an amazing, dynamic, hilarious work and I can tell how much of yourself (no, I'm serious, I don't just mean your OC) you've put into this story. You will always be one of my most authors and friends.

I cannot WAIT to read the sequel.

*deep breath*

[LOUD INCOHERENT SCREAMING]

HOLY HELL, ABBY.

I swear, I think this is my favorite chapter of your entire gorgeous story. And I'm not even done yet! This past few chapters have been crazy and amazing!

North and Sera are officially a thing, Nightlight is Manny's brother, there's apparantly a cosmic mother named Æther, and HOLY BALLS, Baba Yaga's in this? WHAT?

This story is gonna kill me

HOLY HELL BABA YAGA

Holy crap, that last paragraph. I literally just screeched like a pterodactyl in the middle of the library.

Ooooooh a scythe

I swear if Pitch doesn't say "say hello to my motherfucking scythe" at least once I'm going to be very disappointed

Puns and feelings and riddles, oh my!

also HOLY SHIT DRAGONS

The only thing missing from this thing is actual reviews from the usernames you mentioned because HOLY CRAP that would be glorious.

Wow that got REALLY meta, REALLY quick.

Fourth wall, what fourth wall?

dude... my name is abby...
thatissofuckingcool
p.s. this story is pretty funny I like it a lot so far :D