Hmmm I'm liking this! You finally revised this chapter and I love how Death The Kidd acts in here! So awesome! Hopefully him and Maka can be buddies!

Wow I am seriously liking this fic...very interesting!

OMG, please update soon this is AWESOME! Really love it keep writing!

Hmmm I'm a little confused I guess u didn't revise this chapter yet but it was actually pretty good I liked it...anyway loving the story so far revise more plz !

Oh...my...god...thats Soul isn't it!? Yay! Awesome awesome awesome story!

Very interesting beginning :D like it all ready!

And the fun begins~! Update soon!

I just found this piece of work and I like the plot. I wonder how Soul will be able to defeat the witch

I don't like how there are so many make chops I think it's too much

I can't wait for the next chapter!

ahhh been so long since the last time i read this...can't remember how they are in this situation in the first place hahaha

I finally read this chapter and it was beautiful. I sincerely hope you're planning on continuing.

heh well this version of being consumed by madness was much more fascinating than the real one XDD or my memory is tricking me again. anyway GREAT JOB

Is that why Soul was hungry?

I have loved this story since I started reading it. I started reading on fanfiction 5 years ago but I only started an account last year somewhere in November, but in 2013 when you published this story it was one of the few chapter stories that I read that was not complete and it left an imprint on my heart because you are such a good writer I hope you continue writing whether it be this story or on another. Have an awesome life cause I am and so should everyone else (but sadly human stupidity and greed live so that can't happen for everyone but I think the ones that survive are there to teach us on suffering while we exist to teach them comfort and happiness can happen for them)