| Reviews for Rito's Road to Proposal |
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  andhikasetyawan chapter 19 . 1/2/2014 I think chapter 20 will long be made |
 Souma Aquifina -Yulli K. Liam chapter 19 . 9/6/2013 WHERE IS THE NEXT STORY? And what about Haruna? |
| snakedabomb chapter 19 . 8/30/2013 _ loved it! Also love the name of mr. baddie. lol! |
| snakedabomb chapter 18 . 8/30/2013 Sorry I could not reveiw sooner; I have also been cut of from the web... I thought that you eased back into things very well. |
| RandomFictionist chapter 19 . 8/23/2013 awesome I thought I had to wait longer I check my email and I blast In excitement the story updated and I can't wait for the sequel trasting |
| darkboy18 chapter 19 . 8/22/2013 sweet job of ending it but I was wondering can u add me in the next story? please? I want to be a character to help and train rito is his fight against kronos |
| PhantomOfDeath1 chapter 19 . 8/22/2013 After reading this chapter i changed some of the ideas i gave you. Read the last one first, hen use the parts of the one before it that don't contradict the last PM to continue from there. Great chapter and hope you like the new and improved ideas. |
| get bent broski chapter 18 . 8/20/2013 It has been a while but this chapter made up for it |
| darkboy18 chapter 18 . 8/20/2013 oh boy and I have an idea for 19 how about rito and gets everyone at house to drop the bomb and write their reactions and can u bring in deadpool for laughs? |
| shadow chapter 18 . 8/20/2013 It seems like this is going in a bit too fast of a pace for Rito-I think that at this point he might start freaking out about Lala's telling everyone instantly If this was because he trully accidentally called it out and then she starts telling EVERYONE-I think that is grounds for him to start backing away from the situation...which would probably scare the hell out of Lala because that might make her notice that he did it by accident This might all just cause him to propose to him the Earth way though and do it all for real later down the line |
| PhantomOfDeath1 chapter 18 . 8/20/2013 Finally a new chapter. It was good but kinda short. Check the PM i fired your way and see if you like my ideas. If you decide to use them, give me a shout out. Great story and can't wait for the next chapter. |
| diggerboy4 chapter 18 . 8/20/2013 Good chapter, keep them coming |
| Annon chapter 17 . 7/20/2013 Make it like a plrolugue where in the end the harem plan works! |
| RandomFictionist chapter 17 . 7/10/2013 LOL tats a funny spot to leave it and I want to say after the wedding they should have lala finally rape rito to her full wants after or before the wedding |
| Ichigo yakaso chapter 17 . 7/1/2013 I think a good chapter could be something to draw nana closer to rito like say she gets kidnapped by Kronos and rito saves her? Lol idk |
