Reviews for A Whisper on the Wind |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. Aoki was offed. Well, that prived prophetic. He certainly did not survive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Aoki was specializing in healing due to his kind heart..." No one, absolutely, no one survives Root with a "kind heart". Sai did not go through it and got out with a "kind heart". Author, your fic has gritty details than the average run-of-the-mill, dime-a-dozen cheesy moe moe fanfic. Don't ruin it with saintly metaphors. It becomes tacky. I don't mind a love story, as long as this AUHarry does not become a foolish, recklessly suicidal and saintly Griffindor. |
![]() ![]() I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ |
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![]() ![]() Awww I love it! Why did you stop? Please continue? |
![]() ![]() Please update soon looking forward to reading about his time in acdemy and ninja ranks |
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![]() ![]() Update please love it |
![]() ![]() Amazing more soon please |
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