Damn this was good, tremendously heartbreaking for a while but you gave it the perfect happy ending.

You really should consider writing more stories for this anime only two stories isn't enough for a writer with this kinda talent, you definitely play well with emotions really gave this story a wide variety of feelings that not every writer can some have this gift and some don't, and you definitely do.

Please write more amazing stories for this anime, you're insanely great at it.

Ohhhh...the ending was so sweet!

Awwwwww! So cute and heartbreaking! I'll go to your profile to seek my other prey! i shall spare this one...

i am crying... i absolutely love this!

W-ow.

Nice twist at the end (though I have to admit I saw it coming).

The story was overall well written - and the style was unique. _ It was fun to read.

Good short story

Awww, sweet

Had me crying at some points.

:)

Lovely story

Love it. I think you should do this in Inuyasha's POV to.

Excellent story. Your writing style is so enjoyable and addicting with amazing diction and imagery. Keep up the amazing work, my friend. The chance to read stories like this is what draws me to this site. Plus Yash and Kags rock! Lol.