Very engaging! I enjoyed this very much!

Totally LOVE IT! Great story and great follow up to the show. Too bad they wouldn't actually film it.

Oh. My. Goodness! This is an amazing and fantastic story! Very well-written with BEAUTIFULLY done storylines and spot-on characterizations! I am immensely impressed with how you wove such an enjoyable tale! This is everything I never dared to hope for in a sequel! Brava!

It took me 3 days to finish this and it was so EPIC! Virginia's last statement was priceless.

Fabulous! It would be a wonderful way to see it follow the mini series from Hallmark. Thank you so much for sharing!

This chapter was VERY good! I do not want to put this down.

Great chapter!

One quick suggestion: Since you've already given each chapter a name, it would be helpful to list them in the chapter listing (shows up in the drop-down box) by title, so it's easier for a reader to find their place if they have to leave the story and come back to it. This happened to me a couple of times, and since we don't have the storymark feature anymore, it took me a while to find where I'd left off. Just a thought. :)

Bravo! What a wonderful, well-written, carefully plotted, perfectly characterized story! And it fit perfectly with the original, illuminating some things to give them more depth (the Evil Queen's recruitment of Wolf), adding backstory, and acting as a true sequel. I came to love your original characters (especially Rose and Matilde) nearly as much as the canon characters, and that's really saying something.

You are a very talented writer. I really hope you'll keep writing, whether it's fanfiction or something else. You have a gift.

I'm adding this to my favorites!

Awww, lots of lovely, sweet moments for the couples here. Nice!

I'm actually kinda liking Red now. Sad that she had to go through so much to come to her senses about the wolves and what's truly important.

On a side note, I thought Relish's kids would be crazy about what must be a massive shoe collection she had. I guess they were too busy with other stuff, but it always cracked me up in the show when they loved shoes so much.

Glad Wolf's doing so much better. Love Tony and Mathilde's kiss. You've really done a great job with her-I care about her almost as much as the original characters from the show.

I knew it! I knew the cane was Raphaela! Very cool twist!

Ooh, poor Ichabod. *tear* At least he thought he was with the Queen at the end.

This cracked me up: "And did she try to bring even one talking mouse or magic bird into her schools? No she did not. I had several birds specifically come and complain to me about that." LOL

Oh, poor Wolf. Poor Scarlet and Josiah. Poor Tony. *weeps for all of them*

Also, nice job on giving Scarlet a name that didn't immediately give away her connection to RRH by being a jewel name, but still tied in to the family's red theme.