| Reviews for Runaways |
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   brady66 chapter 5 . 8/6 I know that this is an old story but come on...her name is Amelia not Amanda |
| CarolWim chapter 7 . 7/30 Great end. You see, I didn't spoil anything. |
| CarolWim chapter 1 . 7/30 You performed a very serious crime! I really need to report you! How could you! A DARK GREEN JAGUAR! It's a terrible color for a jaguar! My eyes! For the rest ... your story is brilliant. |
| MuffinRamsey chapter 7 . 6/8 Really awesome! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25 Right because families always wander around staring at each other's naked body. Sure. Right. |
| WeisseHex chapter 7 . 5/16 Loved this story!Thanks for sharing it with us! |
| odonnellzoo99 chapter 7 . 5/3 A good story that has some unnecessarily distracting elements. |
| odonnellzoo99 chapter 1 . 5/3 I was going to comment on F&G's ages, but figured it has already been done and too late anyway. |
| Matt chapter 6 . 3/24 Again, your story makes no sense. This takes place in 1996. All Humber Pigs were removed from service before 1995. Therefore, they couldn't have used any Humber Pigs in the operation. |
| Matt chapter 5 . 3/24 Is there a particular reason you decided to change Susan's Aunt's name from Amelia to Amanda? I mean, it's always been Amelia. It's Amelia in basically every story on the Internet. But you had to change it for some reason. Or maybe you just couldn't remember what it was and pulled one that started with the same letter out of your head? Because of course it was too much trouble to look it up. |
| Matt chapter 5 . 3/24 What's Tony Blair doing in this story? Harry's just turned sixteen. That means this takes place in the summer of 1996. John Major was Prime Minister. Tony Blair didn't become Prime Minister until May 1997. Idiot. |
| Matt chapter 4 . 3/24 Wow. Just wow. You write some of the worst sentences in the history of English writing. Either you're not a native English speaker and writer or you completely ignored whatever education you had on English grammar and composition in school. Your teachers would be aghast. |
| Matt chapter 2 . 3/23 "Hi, Mom" Really? Mom? You do remember that Hermione is British? That British people call their mothers Mum, not Mom? Or are you just too dumb? |
| Matt chapter 1 . 3/23 Pensive is an english word meaning engaged in deep or serious thought. What you meant to write but didn't is pensieve, a device in the wizarding world which allows people to view memories. There's a rather large difference between the two. It's all in that extra e in the spelling. |
| Vanadir chapter 7 . 1/26 Thank you for a great story |
