| Reviews for Over the Edge |
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  Guest chapter 3 . 6/30/2017 Forget about kono i came here to read about steve the write up was about steve and grace not kono! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/29/2017 Wow danny is a dick blaming steve maybe if he had looked after his own daughter steve wouldn't of been with grace |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/25/2014 Good start. I am confused about children killed at school on a saturday. I'm not sure if ordering people off a roller coaster is the first course of action. Seems he would need to calmly explain things first. I'm interested in the whump to come. |
| SeanJ111 chapter 13 . 10/1/2013 Great story, I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more from you! |
 t3ra chapter 12 . 9/10/2013 wow... i'm just, speechless. great job and amazing story. if you write another story like this with steve whump, don't be to shy to write me and i will follow your story and review a lot ;) greez |
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/30/2013 SERIOUSLY, THIS IS YOUR FIRST FANFICTION...WHEN I READ THIS I WAS AMAZED BY THE SKILL IN WRITING THE ENTIRE TIME...then you tell me its your FIRST, that's amazing! Your write as if you've been doing it all your life professionally or something! ITS INCREDIBLE...I hope you write another fic with more Steve whump...I feel bad, but I'm a huge fan of that...hehe...but seriously do write more, its fantastic writing |
| bubzchoc chapter 13 . 5/28/2013 excellent story |
| Mari217 chapter 3 . 4/9/2013 I'm very impressed with this, you are very talented especially for your age. Your writing will mature as you do, keep writing! |
| roxtonissexy chapter 13 . 3/22/2013 loved it... look forward to reading more stories from you... |
| Kajtena chapter 13 . 3/21/2013 It was a good story :-) |
| francis2 chapter 13 . 3/21/2013 Steve can be so pertinent. Not even the doctor can resist. This was a great story. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/20/2013 Very impressive. Especially for an eighth grader. Keep up the good work and keep at writing. You have a lot of talent here. |
| ambard10 chapter 13 . 3/20/2013 great story i like steve whump and danno confort him very much... |
| Rainey chapter 13 . 3/20/2013 Congratulations! You really did a wonderful job on your first story. I am already curious about where you will take us in the next one. |
| Zwicki chapter 13 . 3/20/2013 Great story. I’ll be back to read your second. |
