This fanfiction took my breath. It's so beautiful and lovely.

This is how Miles and Olivier should be written. Well done.

All I can say is DAMN that was a well written story. It was just beautiful

Not a big Olivier x Miles shipper but your beautiful fics are making me more inclined towards the pairing. How is that you are able to write so beautifully? Especially this particular fic, it is practically poetry. I wonder, what inspires you?

Really enjoyed this. Miles and Olivier are perfect for each other (at least in my head) and you captured them both very well.

Hmm...this left me at a loss for words. I really don't know what to think of it. You definitely have beautiful description, no doubt about it. I do wish there wasn't quite so much narration, but that's your choice. It's an interesting style and kudos for experimenting.

However, I do find it highly unrealistic that the Ishvalan people would welcome and love Olivier. She's not the friendliest person ever, she's the whitest of the white, her brother was a State Alchemist in the war, and she's a member of the military they've come to despise. And if she's close to Miles and Miles isn't welcomed by them either, that's all the more reason for them to dislike her. Sure, they would warm up to her eventually once they saw her true intentions, but I don't think it would be immediate at all. It could even take years.

But the character development was insightful and like I said, your description and ability to capture images is astounding. I especially liked the idea of Olivier liking the thought of Miles not being scared of her. It's entirely possible that she doesn't really want to be feared, despite what she says.

Not bad. Not bad at all. Different, but a good read. :)

This just made me want to search for more miles x oliver. Great job