amazing story. I love this

LOVE IT! :)

This is so unbelievably amazing! From all the emotion in the first chapter to the insanely cute ending, I loved every bit of it.

I grew up reading the ND yellow spines and I loved them. Ned wasn't always my idea of the "perfect boyfriend" for Nancy...I thought she needed someone with an adventurous spirit to match her own...but you've made him quite likeable. And so much more understanding than he was in the books.

I also like what you did with Ned's mother. I can't recall if we were ever introduced to her in the yellow spines, but I think she would be a great deal like how you've imagined her. And I'm glad she came through for Nancy in the end and accepted who she was in the same way her son had.

Excellent story. Thanks for sharing!