Amazing job on this! I like that in a sense, Vegeta is learning what happens when one falls for the silver tongue of a serpent. He needed to learn a lesson, yes, yet he also needs to learn to heal. Perhaps it's just me, but I can't help but feel compassion for him.

PS-Weird comparison, yet he reminds me of Starscream from Transformers Armada as they both go through very much the same things.

So is there more chapters coming out or is this complete? I have truly enjoyed it up to this point although sad vegeta makes me sad. I did like his reaction to bulma being mad at trunks about hitting his teacher.

Epic. I got sooooo wrapped into it. Continue!

Is this complete? Ah, it's quite good! Your handling of character, dialogue, and plot is spot on! Thank you for this story - it's refreshing and moving. Well done!

great story really like it

I just really enjoyed this was so heartfelt and vocabulary was perfect .it was really an incredibly beautiful story in all .thank you.

Love this story, is so beautiful!

That was... the perfect ending to this beautiful piece! I love it! Awww! Vegeta, I almost cried! Oh, thank Kami, then, for the Love of Bulma... and Trunks, of course.

And thank you! For writing this wonderful fic! I really enjoyed reading it!

Hahaha! Curse yourself? Oh, Bulma is a blessing to you and you know it... ah, right, you meant Earth. :) It's not really that bad, though, Vegeta. Haha!

Hahaha! Ha, bipolar? Huh, the only thing Vegeta needs to survive is her... Hahaha!

I love this awesome, quite funny chapter!

"The only fighting he'd been doing was fighting the urge to tell his Father off." Hahaha! Trunks, you funny boy! :)

"You can have all the muscle and physical strength in the world, but if you're an idiot,you're not going to win." Trunks frowned and crossed his arms across his " Got that right! "Strength is important, and essential. But it isn't everything." Vegeta realizes this now more than ever. And it is important that Trunks does so, too, while he is still in the beginning.

...Vegeta's words... somehow... calming? ..Yeah! Wow! I.. almost meditated along with them, but hey, I'm reading! Haha! But wow, I never thought even Saiyans need this sort of training/atunement like we humans sometimes do. Wow, no wonder Trunks would be in awe and think that Vegeta did, in fact hold all the secrets in the universe! Aww, I love his adoration and respect for his dad.

Um, a couple of corrections again, sorry. "He chest puffed out" and "death starting me in the face"... please do something about those? Thanks! Awesome job, though, again1

Ah, and one more; "At the time he been completely appalled, "... ah, sorry, but... there's another one spotted that oculd be made better; hope you won't mind? "Your cuss more than I do", "It was if there as some part of him that…was okay with the idea." You know the drill, dear author! :)

Woah! Screaming matches? That's normal now, all right; what with those insults...

Ah, things are finally starting to get better, glad for Trunks! Awesome chappie... yet again! :)

Hmmm, "And what was the most appalling about the whole thing was that he wasn't completely opposed to it. " Two things wrong about that sentence: First, the double-'Was's, and second... aww! Accept it, Vegeta! You want this... need this! Another Tenshi, another to add to your wonderful family! :)

We are awesome? You are awesome! Tenchi? Saiyan-speak for "I love you," I'm guessing? Awww! Vegeta...

Stuff that could use a bit of fixing? "So you won't…" He voice faltered", And "She didn't have time to ask him what he what it meant. " You've got them, you take care of 'em. :)

Aww! Angel. See? There's more to this relationship than 'Woman', no matter how impossibly cute it is. :-)

Oh, that's so right! If Vegeta knew Goku had complimented his strength back then, citing it as one of the main reasons for sparing his life... wow, boy would he be surprised! Surely!

"You uncle?" Um, please change that to "Your", a'right? :)

Steaming, burning furious, Trunks! Hahaha! Awww! Gotta love this boy! He is half-Saiyan and the son of Vegeta and Bulma, true... but he is still an eight-year-old boy!

"Sheesh, defensive much? I don't know which of his parents to blame that on…probably both!" Got that right, Gohan, totally, absolutely, undoubtedly, definitely both! Haha!

My goodness, I am lovin' everything here more and more, thanks a million to you're awesomeness! :)

Oh, killed or not, Gohan, tell on! Please! Trunks is smart... and see? I forgot about that! Vegeta didn't tell him about the Saiyan attack! Woah!

Anyway, love this! Gohan, you're the best!