Gk

You must had stop on chapter 3. Up to there was good. Now is just crap.

In the previous chapter you have harry yell and stop hermione from touching the diadem because it has a soul shard but now harry just puts the stone in his hand knowing it also has a soul shard that's pretty stupid especially for somebody that is supposed to have Voldemort's knowledge

If it was so obvious that harry liked hermione why would she have said something in the last 2 years, that just seems like your trying to make her too knowledgeable since if she loved him since first year she would have taken the chance to be with him

I kinda loved this whole fic, it's was what happened to Ron but what can ya do? Definitely a great read!

If Harry and Hermione were truly ruthless, they would've killed that faggot Draco, the fatass Neville, and the ginger cocksucker Ron earlier. You know what, fuck you and your cunt of a mother.

Very good.. but could have used a bit more smut/lemons, you go more in detail with draco and ginny then harry en hermione what a shame.

Are you fucking kidding me? He has all of Voldemort's knowledge and memories, yet he still fell for the horcrux's trick? Are you an idiot?

Yes, Rowena Ravenclaw was an incredibly talented and vastly intelligent witch, but you seem to underestimate Voldemort's own incredible intelligence when comparing it to hers.

Just because your somebodies descendant doesnt mean you share the same traits even though in this case it's TRUE and hermione never got tested it was more like she judged if she was worthy or not, but it's still a nice free power up for her.

So harry reads the first 2 contracts but then just decided to sign the last one which DC oesnt seem like him since he was being careful with what he signed. Hermione may now be a master legilimens but Voldemort is by far the best legilimens if his time so how much better is hermione if at all and why can't harry use it, or any or voldemorts abilities that hand seem to be brushed aside in this story.

The diadem is supposed to test hermione but just judges her. I get hermione has the diadem now but considering harry has all of voldemorts knowledge up til October 1981 it makes no sense why he wouldn't easily know how to dismantle his own wards along with the spells on the box. It seems like your just trying to make him seem stupider and less capable than he really should be with Voldemorts knowledge.

I don't understand how they have the same dreams but hermione remembers hers pretty clearly and harry completely forgets about them or doesn't even remember having them.

I liked the story for the most part, but the ending felt quite abrupt. Need more time with Dark Harry & Hermione taking over & kicking butt.

Also, Ginny with Draco makes me vomit. Poor Ginny didn't deserve that.

Nice but so many holes in this last few chapters