That ending D: 0.0 woah

Ohhhhhhhh boy. Oh boy oh boy. I’m so glad I have seven Fire chapters because I am not gonna be able to hold it together. We really are gonna need SO. MANY. HUGS. You’ve grabbed my heart and you’re doing a fantastic job of tearing it into pieces. Oh my soul.

AHHHHHH. I don’t think I’ve read this far before! It’s so good and it’s making a lot of sense! Of course you had to have him go back, but I love the spy thing. I LOVE IT. Oh, Zuko. Sapphire, I have so much trust in you and this story. Keep going, girl. This is amazing.

Okay, so I think I already reviewed this chapter, but I’m reading through everything again and I am SCREAMING. This is SO GOOD. The TENSION. The BANTER. TOPH TOPH TOPH. I am just so in love with this. Thank you for writing this story and working on it for literal years. I love you for it.

I can't help but be a little disappointed about how this went down. I feel like Zuko shooting Aang down went against all his progress. He keep saying how he wanted to help Aang because he wanted him to send Dakota back to her real world, but then he shoots him with lightning? He said he did it because Azula would have been worse, but he basically did the same thing she did in canon.
I was hoping that at last second he would turn his lightning on her and just join the avatar sooner then he was supposed to.
I know he plans to go back to the Fire Nation as a spy, but I just feel like his character arc so far would have made him want to join Aang sooner. \_(ツ)_/
Oh well, it's a great story nonetheless. I'm looking forward to reading the third one!

Omg I can’t stop smiling! There first kiss so cute I love it! I just know bad things are now to come :(

Eeeeep yes Iroh! And so it begins. But now I am scared because of what Aang saw in the swamp :(

Ohhhhh shit. I should have made the connection. I really should have. The comet, the hundred years, the flashback already provided. I’m honestly a little disappointed in myself. But fantastic world building!

I like how Koda and Zuko are struggling over their losses over themselves and each other, it’s a very interesting to see them struggle internally and with other people

If I had any criticism, it would be how Dakota’s bisexuality is played out here. I am all for writing lgbt characters, and should be written like normal people and represented

But a writing problem I have in general is how writers will suddenly make their character this sexuality, with no hints or foreshadowing, or straightforward acknowledgement in the past (like reincorporation)

Your writing is terrific, but I wished Dakota’s bisexuality was hinted or brought up at in the past (like talked about or a passing mention), because in general, just bringing it up out of nowhere is kind good writing (it doesn’t even have to be sexuality, it could be plot points and backstories). But I’m sure you will take this part of Dakota’s character to a good direction, you’ve never failed on character arcs in these three fan fictions

Bruh they cute or whateva. But seriously I loved and enjoyed every single second of that I reread the chapter again.

WOW! My heart just melted when I realized he was trying to recreate the Christmas tree for her! I had to pause from reading because it gave me too many feels XD

I usually don't give reviews to stories I read online, but I just had to because I was really shocked when Zuko decided to try and keep Aang alive. I thought for sure that Zuko would return to the Fire Nation as a prince with honor and have the credit of killing the Avatar. However, that doesn't seem to be the case now, so I decided to give a review because I'm really curious now about how things will go down now!

I love Dakoda so much, and I can't wait to know the rest of her story! Keep up the amazing work!

This story is amazing I can't wait to read the next one :-)

Ok... I ship it

I just realized that you don't need to know anything about avatar to read these stories.

Is henry going to watch the show and see Dakota? and then will he freak out?