Hello! This story is so cute and touching, I love it! I love how you mixed Lucy being a mother to how she came to Fairy Tail and be treated the same way, still with Natsu hanging out with her all the time, that was awesome! It was so cute how Natsu acted like Mei's real father with how frequent he was with her, even when he called out to Lucy for her first word and her first steps, that was so adorable! I was reminded of how I like stories with them and a baby or babies for that matter. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story! Have a nice day and stay safe.

Simply beautiful.

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Awwwww how cute! I wish you made this an on going story and explain with more details what really happened! Such an awesome story!

simply touching and heart warming. i love it! little mei is soooo cute!

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I love how even though there was a lack of transitions, the story still flowed pretty nicely

Awwww! I don't really agree with Loke being like that, because he's nicer and not a douchebag but still great one-shot! I really loved it!

I love it a lot! It's so cute and nice and you played everything almost perfectly. Great
job!

SO SWEET! *dies from too much sweetness* i really like REALLY love your one-shots. Keep 'em coming.

wow... :D I love it haha! good job :)

GAHH! LOVE IT! ONE OF THE BEST NALU ONE SHOTS I'VE READ! GAHHHH LUCY YOU LUCKY GIRL! I WANT NATSU TOOOOOOO! XD