Reviews for Raising the Odds |
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levios chapter 6 . 7/25/2017 Thank you. It was amazing. I have no words. I'm just so glad I finally read it, I really loved it. I hope you're still writing because I love your writing and I'm amazed how you managed to build such an easy going story with such a heavy topic. And the characters! And the ending! Well.. I guess I had some words, but not enough to tell you how good it was.. But once again, thank you for an amazing story! I'm really impressed! |
NikkiLizzie chapter 6 . 9/14/2014 I just read this for the third time. It's one of my favorites. You just did such a nice job with it. |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/26/2014 This made is sob. I hope you're happy. (beautiful) |
guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2013 i love is one of my 's ! |
chele the original chapter 6 . 8/29/2013 Wonderful! |
chele the original chapter 5 . 8/29/2013 Well it's about time Merlin. goof chapter, |
chele the original chapter 4 . 8/29/2013 sadness and confusion. Hugs to Merlin. |
chele the original chapter 3 . 8/29/2013 Merlin's friends are weird.I think Arthur fancies Merlin. |
chele the original chapter 2 . 8/29/2013 Arthur, could you make things anymore awkward for Merlin. At least Jenny was nice about it. |
chele the original chapter 1 . 8/29/2013 Good beginning . Sad diagnosis. lmfao with the howler monkey comment. |
axisofsymmetry chapter 6 . 8/6/2013 my favorite line by far: "Don't tell me when you're about to start. I'm not going to look, just make it so – OH MY GOD, YOU'VE STARTED, SHIT SHIT SHIT!" i laugh/cried so hard about this whole story, really. like, wow serious heavy topic here and yet it was just so FUNNY in the first couple chapters. i mean honestly this is kind of exactly what id expect of real-life people. the devastation, the numbness, the idiot friends who make light of it and it actually kind of WORKS so it was just like this teetering balance of serious/hilarious to the point that i was all but laughing with tears in my eyes and then it actually DID get serious but it ended all nicely and im rly happy? like wow it was just such a great thing to read, especially since i was reeled in like a fish on the summary alone, and im really glad the story lived up to it i cant honestly say i have any criticism for this story. i mean, this is a difficult subject to tackle in the first place, and for you to do that, and with such care, theres just nothing really to criticize on that front (and since i was so drawn into it, i probably hadnt noticed any glaring errors in it). seriously though it had a steady flow and a full story, and i cant say there were any spelling or grammar mistakes that stuck in my mind. maybe you could have fleshed out the ending a little more, but i was content with it so, eh. on a side note, was this in any way based off that movie "fifty/fifty"? cuz that term was thrown around a few times and i just kept being reminded of that, not that i actually saw the movie. just wondering, i guess. |
KJ's Manuscript chapter 6 . 3/16/2013 Your writing style is amazing. I loved this story immensely. |
Magpie1600 chapter 6 . 3/12/2013 I'm a mess here. A weeping happy mess. I loved every damn word of it. Thank you so much. |
nannily chapter 6 . 3/10/2013 Aw, that was really sweet. :) I'm glad Merlin's healthy. :) |
huntersandhalos chapter 6 . 3/10/2013 Aww... I'm so glad Merlin didn't die :D This was an awesome story- Great job! :) |