Are there any more stories about either April or Karai getting naked and wet with pleasure that I can find?

This Shredder is a bit calmer than the original. Which is pretty damn good for a character that was written in a fan fiction.
Damn, I wish Shredder in cannon were just as interesting as how you wrote him.

My reaction is exactly like the elite ninja's. O_O

What has happened to my Splinter-senpai!? D':

When you said that this was going to DARK, I did not expect that this would go to the dirty part. Don't get me wrong, I freakin' love Leorai and I freakin' love your writing! But the thought that Karai would you-know-what with Leo just gives me shudders.
I was really relieved when he decided to reject her 'offer'.

heh heh :3

Anyway, you're such an amazing writer! it's not all the time that I read a fanfiction with a heavy storyline and in-character characters. 'Em want more!

nice but maybe u should dial back on some parts of this chapter. Overall, it was great!

The visuals you give your reader in this chapter are absolutely incredible! To go from Leo in total supplication and humiliation in front of his father and brothers only to have the scene completely turn, having it turn to ferocious bloodsport is phenomenal! I've said it before and I know I'll be writing it a thousand times over before this story ends but you are an incredibly gifted writer and I am beyond thrilled that I found your stories!

Oh. My. God! My heart is absolutely broken for Leo! You wrote these scenes brilliantly! His desperation, need, and humiliation. And in equal measure, I feel Raph's fury! Tremendous, tremendous writing!

Wow! Just starting to dive into this amazing story but just have to say I love how you are writing this so far! Leo and Karai's voices and actions are spot on. Everything you have given us so far is 'so them'. Incredible writing! You are amazingly talented!

Love is never easy. Never was and never will be.

Wow! What an epic story! Gah! I feel so horrible for all the pain everybody's experiencing in this story! Course that's 'cause you're such an incredibly descriptive writer! You really know how to put the reader in the character's heads!

I thought you did an exceptional job of writing everyone in character. I always have mixed feelings about Karai but, dammit, now my heart breaks for her! And of course it's utterly broke for Leo and Donnie! I just wanna reach in to your story and 'make it all better ' for everyone! I know, it's not always meant to work out that way! Rrrrrrr!

Anyway, was loving your song choices! Music really enhances my thought processes too! Here's a suggestion: Wild Horses by The Rolling Stones, great song, love the Stones, but you gotta check out the song as covered by The Sundays. It's all that song's meaning done to a haunting, melancholy voice that just seems to fit that chapter perfectly!

Super glad you've continued this story arc! It's just really obsessed my lately, and I'm excited to hop on over to Mikey's Girl. Totally stoked about that!

Thanks for sharing your talent!

Hugs!

-The Shel!

Awww Raph u so rude :( to Leo

This story was amazing. I am not a fan of Karai usually. I ho with Ralph in my opinion of her, but I love your portrayal of her and Leo's relationship and even the dimension you give to Shredder.
The paintings and imagery you create with your words are stunning. The broken angel and the church were exquisite.

Heading for the sequels now. :)

Lmao the expression of the elite ninja had me laughing my ass off. So hilarious. Couldn't bring myself not to comment as I usually wait until have read til the end but that was classic couldn't go on without reviewing. Bloody funny cliffs lmao. Daddy ain't going to like it lmao.

Words cannot express how much I love this fic. Everything that you put on here is exactly how I see the Leo/Karai relationship. Light and dark, Yin and Yang. Like Romeo and Juliet, their love is tragic. I was so sad when I saw Karai ended up with Chaplain on 2k3 series and was even more disappointed when they couldn't keep Karai as a villain on 2k12 series. I don't mind her as the good guy, really, since she's always been like that, but its more fun writing her this way.