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![]() ![]() ![]() great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you ended this in just the right manner. Thank you for such a wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should totally make a sequel for this of their next life or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its really good story but it feels like there should be more to it. So much from their lives was not even touched. There could be more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story as a whole but have to say I was it satisfied by the ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I loved the pairing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Sad to see it end but it was a great one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the ending. I'd love to know how they were able to get away from the villages without councils and such insisting they stay or be watched. Such a good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww :( Loved this! Sad to see it over! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! It's over? ALREADY?! Sad :"( So sad. Oh well. Thank you for posting! I adored this story no matter how short :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. I like that you have Naruto and Gaara transition into demons. Ah they're going to be separate now...I can't wait to read how that journey goes along for the trio. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it just keeps getting better and better |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, they're seperating... sad :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yas! She has them both. Nice work! |