Loved it! So intense and sweet.

Another wonderful story! :)

This is excellent. As searing as it would be given the circumstance. (DK how you feel about season 6, but after this - this level of love, of commitment, or shared pain - we get ... Pike? Really?!)

You've done it again amazing story and the character are very true to cannon. Love your stories

Great two-shot! It's a good thing you continue the one-shots "under pressure"...because I have zero imagination

Reading the end of this I just keep seeing like VanPelt or maybe even Rigsby walking in on them laying next to each other talking or with her asleep next to him or them kissing and getting all flustered before akwardly leaving.

Gee - didn't even notice the "ambulance/I love you" scene was missing; definitely too busy enjoying the delightful story and interplay between Jane, Lisbon and Cho.

This was fabulous.

I'm glad you made it into a two-parter and I personally didn't think it was disjointed, I think it was a really great story.
Also, I completely understand the whole 'waiting in the ambulance/i love you scene' because your right, they do appear more often than needed. But I disagree, I think you could write them just as well :)
This was really well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it!

This was sooooo beautiful. If you felt like continuing I would totally and wholeheartedly support that.

I'm glad you didn't use the cliched 'I love you' scene, totally overdone. I much preferred your story. It was so beautiful, I can actually imagine this happening in an episode (or so I like to think!). I really really loved this, kept me glued to my computer the whole way through.

Keep up the phenomenal work.

xxx Grace.

a very good story, so sweet and hot

Liked it?...I LOVED IT :)
Its not marked as complete...any chance of one final chapter showing us how they move on from RJ?

"I meant it when I said I loved you. And I'll love you every day for the rest of my life, however long it might be."

...I think I actually cried at this bit!

Glad you made it a two shot. Great job

Lovely! And you really had me going-I thought you might actually kill of Jane. That's good writing! Love the sexy banter at the end, too. Well done, my friend. Very suspenseful and then romantic, with bits of humor along the way. That's what makes a great fic! As always, looking forward to more from you.

wow this was worth the long wait!
You did an amazing job on this, I loved it so, so much!
Of course Lisbon would come and safe Jane :')
I hope you continue your TM/Castle Crossover fic soon!
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