Reviews for Of Mischief and Men |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "I want it done right and not rushed, so you're going to have to wait until the next chapter." Three years later, I find this story and there is no final chapter. Ah well, happens to the best of us. I've been working on a couple stories for a few years with no updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1st: You did the women so damned perfectly I can actually see them sitting around that table talking. 2: I nearly fell down at the "xenophilia" comment |
![]() ![]() I LOVED this chapter lol! First section was all dramatic and the second half was humor. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuh more waiting xD ... Grrrr was so into the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Raaaaaaaaaaaaawr can't wait for the next chapter its getting awesome and the whole blackmailing x3 makes wonder just how much joker knows x3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() Get yourself a beta, please :) |
![]() ![]() KaidAn. KASUMI. No 't' there. Not gonna read further until you correct those. |
![]() ![]() ![]() MORE! Please! I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() go get him shepard! lol i hope garrus jumps her. that would be hot :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful chapter! I'm glad that Shep and Garrus get to hear from their "dates" that neither is delusional about what the other feels. Loved the ballroom dancing bit. Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() The tension, I can feel the tension! Also, for some reason, I have the following song in my head. It seems strangely appropriate: Oh, it's creepin' up slowly, It's taking me over, it's turning me on. With every breath that I take, I roll up my dreams, and blow them away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, I'm curious to see how far the crew takes this whole prank. Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMAO! I can't wait to see what you do with that 'audio bug' in Shepard's room. |
![]() ![]() Ooh, hope Tali didn't hear Shepard talking about acting jealous lol! Can't wait for the next chapter! |