It was really great! You did a really good job!

This was a really good first story. Very in character, easy to follow. I like your formatting. Next story, flesh it out a little...give us some narrative to go along with the dialog, which from what you've showed us, you seem to be very good at. Great job, hope to see more of your writing in the future. :)

this was really cute! GREAT JOB :)

This is great! Your formatting is very well for your first time, please continue!

That was amazing! You should do more stories like these

Good job!

*peddie feels.* you should make a sequel where they get back together! I'll read it. :)