good god, this story makes me shiver everytime i read it. i have whole thing about it all being inside ichigos head is just so creepy, but in a good way

Oh my god. That was brilliant.

I'm gonna keep this short and sweet.

This...

WAS FUCKING BADASS D:

woah that was awesome. I loved how you did that. :D good job.

Totally saw the end happening xD twas great :D

that was so awesome! the flow of the story is really easy to follow and the concept is brilliant!

That was just plain awesome, sick and insane; lol you even made me think that I was crazy... *looks around* alright maybe I am a bit crazy, but at least not insane.
Excellent story, you really should make a second chapter!

Oh my god! Soooo creeeepyyyyyy.

I liked it a lot. Always did like evil Shiro most. :)

Good job!

Oh how I did luv this. :D so creepy and you! Love iiiiiiitttttt!