Very nice. I felt bad for Cait. The chapter that you had the hardest time with is very well done. Great story. Very nice. I would like to see some more trauma symptoms from Cait though. Little shudders, overreactions, etc...keep up the great work

Reviewing the whole story...

WOW...what a ride! (But then again, what would you expect from this crew?) Cait's transformation (and Hawke's realization of it, and his feelings) as a result of the attack were perfect...I could almost hear Jean Bruce Scott and Jan Michael Vincent having that argument! And I loved Cait's comment at the end..."Tell him not to come by too soon." Yeah, I have a feeling Dom would be AWFULLY foolish to ignore that advice. :)

Great story-very well written. :)

Robert

It's a good thing you were fast with the chapters. I haven't been on the Airwolf fanpage in a week or two, so I got to read this without having to stay on the edge of my seat. Great job. Any chance you feel up to a sequel?

very good fic- read straight through! liked the ending very much!

That was a very good ending. A great job of writing on a difficult subject. I hope that you continue to add to this venue.

It may have been short, but it was good.

Well done! Suspenseful, good character development within character. Love it.

Sorry, but Chapter 7 didn't show up. It shows that there is more words, but they don't show up. Please work it out so we get to read what you have written. I am enjoying the story so much!

The silence of the next several seconds was deafening and eternal as Cait waited for Hawke's response.

sighs, I love the picture this sentence paints, it is both dark and truthful. Looking to forward to what otehr dangers you might find Air Wolf members into.

Excellent plan!

You handled it just the way I would have. Great job!

How about when String meets Michael at the cabin, he has Dom and Cait with him. String wants to go after Horn, but Cait insists on coming in the cargo hold (I know that's not what it's called, but I can't think right now) so she will get some revenge on Horn. It will be good if she is allowed to kill Horn and the guy who raped her when she "rescues" Hawke from them.

OOOhhh. 'Know though Tet wasn't mentioned, I could see him slinking under the bed or somewhwere safe. From getting caught it the storm.

Definitely interested to see how this phototype plays out.

I like it and I am very glad that you are writing it quickly!

Great chapter! You are doing a very good job with the nailing the characters. Great job! Can't wait to read more!