| Reviews for Disbeat Disruptis |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2018 Please update this! I really want to read this story! I want to see how different Danny will be in this world, and how he'll react to the others in this world too, I hope they manage to help Danny trust people again, because I feel that after all the torture and abuse, we wont want to trust anyone. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/10/2018 I think this could be a great story can't wait to see the rewrite |
| cheshire shadow chapter 1 . 1/11/2018 hopefully sauon's weapons can't hurt him...he might be useful for negotiating with that big group of ghosts that aragorn has control over... |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2017 Aren't you going to update? |
 ChaoticMinds chapter 2 . 9/22/2017 Arghhh! Come ON..! You're rewriting after just putting up the prologue?! That's seriously not cool. And this was FOUR YEARS AGO. Surely that's enough time to put out at least ONE more chapter of this? Ugh. This upsets me a lot because this story had so much potential. And it's abandoned. Sigh... It was really mean of you to leave the prologue and abandon it. It's like a cruel tease to readers. "Oh, here, have this wonderfully sad but hopeful beginning, but oops! Just kidding! You aren't getting anything else!" If you weren't going to work on it beyond this, you shouldn't have posted this on any public domain at all. 8U |
| 553Colinm chapter 2 . 5/27/2016 Love the story |
| Autumn's Dusk Shadow chapter 3 . 11/3/2015 Please update soon.:) |
| ivanganev1992 chapter 1 . 6/10/2015 ch1 last ch 3 |
| ivanganev1992 chapter 3 . 6/10/2015 ch 3 Intresting begining , what happends next ? |
| bluesz chapter 3 . 1/20/2015 When are you planning in update a new chapter? |
| elinasti0 chapter 3 . 1/19/2015 I am really happy you are doing this fanfiction. |
| Capancakes chapter 2 . 1/3/2015 I just get more and more excited for this! I'm a bit sad because it looks like Danny won't meet Strider for a while now and i loved their interactions but its gonna be worth it. Can't wait! |
| Mystic Myra 8 chapter 2 . 1/4/2015 omg! you LIVE! i was worried for a second there. Glad you're ok can't wait for what you have in store for this story. i find the idea fascinating and i would write my own, buy i just don't know where to start. just middle part |
| WordSmyth chapter 4 . 12/18/2014 I would suggest finding bits and pieces that could be slightly manipulated so as to simplify the storyline. I don't really know anything, it's been a while since I read the books but I'm sure you could find something. Maybe you could do a reminiscing scene for us to tide everyone over while you figure out your next chapter? |
| Megalograptus chapter 4 . 12/5/2014 Awesome please continue! |
